Table of Contents HNMNBM
HNMNBM is science fiction romance. The purpose is to entertain, challenge, and inform. The book the story of three young men finding their place in life at the end of the 4th industrial revolution and the people they meet, love, and struggle with. It is a time of heightened violence, political polarization, pollution, waste, climate change, and economic change, (fiat currency, gilded age). Against that backdrop, the group must work together to survive, worship and prosper.
NOTE: If the book is successful, the plot design allows for expansion into a trilogy, (HNMNBM, Blue Circle, and Citia).
Intelligence, life will find a way, ai, AI, goals, human, canine, rat?
Ecology, carbon, plastic, glass
Natural disasters, hurricane, bomb cyclone, fire, earthquake,
Water bottles, tap water is dangerous, (called raw water), most characters carry water bottles, neopuritans take it to extreme,
Violence, political polarization
Debt, personal, corporate, government, hard money environment, getting worse
Crow, the 5th animal
Up and Out, owe my soul to the company store
Robots taking our jobs, disposable people, haves, midway haves, have nots, examples of people teaming with robots as well
What will you pay for security: physical security, cybersecurity, privacy, resistance to the deep state
Cryptocurrency, blue circle
Business card, all have special properties, opportunity at humor and sci fi
God, through Jesus Christ, rules, in the end we see the plans of man can come to naught
Wonk: taking care of business, growing up, first sex, 21 and fake persona, manhood, likes to bonk, business card
Characters, brief, see character file:
Guy, Crow, Wonks best friend, main squeeze of the net girls
Gloria, hotter than Yolanda, MA, becomes messianic jew
Yolanda, Otter/beaver, cougar, financial success, Yolanda's children
Traveler, carbon, ascetism, founder HNMNBM, tree hugger, Christian
Gizmo, things are going bad, physical security, physical disasters
** Clara Bow, shadowy mystical person, Relationship Concierge, hooks Guy up with net girls, later, Fozia, Wonk is her one true love
Time in the 24 hour system 4:00 PM is 1600 in the book
Metric system unless there is an explicit reason to use English/American
Molecules do not use subscript, (hard to read) CO2 H2O etc
Numbers in numeric form unless: very large, or it sounds good Saul has his thousands, David has his tens of thousands
Quoted speech, trying to avoid unnecessary quotes, if I need to bring attention to a phrase, I use quotes, punctuation is inside the "
Word boxes are used to explain obscure references, author of poetry etc as a white space alternative to inline explanations that are also used. Try to make it sound like an AI inserted, (no humor, concise)
Run on sentences, yup
References to songs, poems, literature, realize this needs to be standardized
Indent 1: Phone, email, presence, telegram etc
Indent 2: Explanatory text
Indent 3: Sidebars, need to look at this closely
blockchain is lower case except for the start of a sentence
US is preferred over U.S. or USA in most cases
The five animals Lion, Otter, Beaver, Retriever, Crow are capitalized when referring to a person, "ever the Otter, Wonk ..."
Depository I and Depository II, (name of a building or monument)
Blue Circle, Circle, High Table
Many real companies/place names consider asking for permission and ....... I have tried to be more careful with people unless historical and famous e.g. Albert Einstein
The novel has a set of messages: 1) God will prevail and is worthy to be praised, 2) Caring about the planet is wise and reasonable, 3) Genetics, acting like God, can be foolish and dangerous, "get your own dirt. 4) Debt, leverage, can get out of control as quickly as opioids. I try to avoid Republican, Democrat, Right, Left, some bleedthrough may happen, will keep proofreading.
HNMNBM (Book 1)
ACT 1 The foundation1.1 In which we introduce the primary character Wonk. Guy, Reverend Chase Slocom and Gloria.
Two total years before 1.2, December, six months before 1.2 Netgirls, Carla, Chara, Clara, Introduce Wonk, Guy, pretty sister Shari, Wonk's bikini barista partner, Slocom, Chara HNMNBieNet, (introduce mesh/sneaker and WD abc12345cba backdoor drives), HNMNBM News Network, Gloria Bestow, we state Wonk is 18,
HNMNBM is first defined, Traveler's joke party. Draft v.2.3 02/20/18
1.2 In which we introduce Traveler and Cody Boy, make sure Wonk is familiar with HNMNBie, gets laid, (and harvested) and lay the seed that he may be a clone, or something similar.
June Bat Mitzvah, Yolanda, Traveler, Wonk gets laid 1st time, develop HNMNBM, introduce blockiamonds, Ahuva, Rhea and Bandi, robusts and the chase of Guy and robodog, Botxennials
four animals + crow, Gloria hires Rhea. Draft v.2.3 02/20/18
1.3 In which we demonstrate both men are martial artists, (not superstars though), introduce Wonk's future physical security squad, blue blood, and most important Net Girls
Mid-July Wonk Adrian Wave park fight, Stephen Paddock, filtered water, (starting to set up neo-puritans, Madagascar Charles Vanderbilt, Traveler's first EA, the HNMNBM party, Blue Circle, Skip PNWRV, WTG tacticals(Wonk, Traveler, Gizmo), PSE, Humph the neorat, Wonk Safety and Security, Guy meets net girls, Wonk first meets Fozia, (nothing serious, introducing the character) | Draft v.2.1 02/20/18
NOTE: all themes have been introduced in each of 1.1, 1.2, 1.3
1.4 In which Wonk gets laid, and loves Gloria who makes Aliya, introduce Depository II
August Gloria Aliyah love, Madagascar II, Cody and Bandi, Harold photographer, chatbot, Traveler visits the PNWRV with Skip in Nevada, ooh la la, Pussy Galore drama leads to Wonk's business Lucida, protective AI, robot PSE, Eli Gallen, Harold boudoir photo Yolanda. | Draft v.2 12/9/17
1.5 In which H Coin is born, Wonk does tantra, Angelica and Yolanda realize the importance of taking HNMNBM underground, fireline Traveler and Angelica
September Key signing at Iron Spring, waiter, business card, deranged AI |
Draft v.2 12/19/17
NOTE: We are ~120 pages
ACT 2 The deep state
1.6 Traveler is made, escape to Hawaii
Late October Aliya Traveler,'s Escape to Hawaii Yolanda, surges forward, power of influence , End October Traveler,'s escape, haircut, more development EVE EVE.ai, Sandy, Hawaii, nuke rodent laboratory from high orbit?
NOTE: words like Aloha, Mahalo are not used before 1.6 Gloria, Aliyah, ninja girl video, Madagascar III smart rats |
Depository II is a Blue Circle service, hosted for H Coin
Draft v.2 12/20/17
1.7 In which we introduce No Problem AirService AND B2B giving our characters the ability to travel without going through major airports all of the time
November Wonk/Traveler, Frequent flyers, No Problem AirService, Blockchain sneakernet, AI concierge, Madagascar III, rise of the neorat toolbuilder, Up and Out,
Draft v.2 12/28/17
1.8 In which we build the resistance IT
November Tea house, shared IT Department, mail, phones, assassinbot, net girls shopping Costco and Coral and Carla party, Guy's house warming, Wonk sells Curvaceous Coffee, He is < I, first carbon house, Guy goes to Hawaii. Cody finds sneakernet van with high energy blockchain, Wonk dates Fozia. Draft v11/21/17
1.9 In which we introduce Robust as villains, Net Girls as smart, fun loving AND dangerous, differentiate Blue Circle and HNMNBie, introduce High Table,, H Coin value, Blimps, FireLine robots, mystical blockchain, proof of spell, introduce Josh Brandon
December rainy season in Madagascar begins, well underway in Seattle, not so bad in Hawaii
HNMNBie data center, statue, Robust terrorist show of strength, bombs, terrorist captured, Blue Circle High Table Josh Bandon, meeting Green Bay scheduled, Wonk's AI love song to Fozia, H coin, blimp, FireLine, Shipping
1.10 January in which Traveler falls in love, Leilani and Traveler, farmer's market, poetry slam, Traveler explains who he is, Leilani meets Eve.ai, Principus blockchain is ruptured, Wonk takes on a leadership role in the "gang". Gizmo and Yakov discuss the scarcity problem and the trust issue in H coin. Yolanda, who now seems to channel Cleopatra for her wardrobe and Controller hunt down and kill the hackers that ruptured the chain, but they are now squarely in the sights of deep state and the flat earth party.
1.11 February Green Bay, Wonk invited to Blue Circle, Traveler to high table. Green Bay shows Josh is at odds, more hints of NeoPuritanism, Wonk accepts salvation, Traveler returns to Hawaii after the unseasonal hurricane.Wonk is getting much more active in the protection safety business, this is the point where he and Operator.AI move into the COO/consigliere role. Fire tacticals. In Green Bay, High Table breaks fellowship with Yolanda, but negotiates to give her control of Depository II sans the seed gold Traveler, Gizmo, Wonk, Angelica invested. Controller and Pedro elect to stay with her and Principus. She gets to Madagascar just in time to lead the defense of an attack by Somalian pirates and her vengance is swift and sure.
ACT 3 Flight versus Fight
1.12 In which Traveler returns to the mainland to stay, In which Wonk gets engaged to Fozia, he consolidates his power, Lake Tapps escape, Blue Circle Splinters into a no HNMNBM segment, releases B Coin
Josh Bandon breaks with the Blue Circle/HNMNBM leaning people and creates his own following NeoPuritan targeting greater government management, "they'll believe what I tell them to believe" But Josh doesn't have a seat at the ever more attractive H Coin table, tries to create B Coin
1.13 In which the tax revolt movement begins
The high school majority reduces funding for higher education
1.14 Guy talks the gang into entering an ice canoe race. "Originally a means of winter transport between the islands and shores of the Saint Lawrence River, ice canoeing is now a sport. Crews of five athletes alternately push their canoe across the ice on the frozen parts of the river, and row in a river with currents of four knots, tides of over 15 feet, and ice blocks weighing a few tonnes blown by the wind. Shoes with bolts screwed to the bottom are worn to keep their traction on the ice."
1.15 Stillness. Debt crisis begins. Vesper
1.16 In which Gloria dies, Traveler becomes the leader of the gang of 9, Darkness Fall. Last chapter.
- Year -50 Traveler, and the fence - In this chapter, we need to introduce the gang of 7, (before it exists), need something on the West coast as well. Need to introduce the University. Need drama and character development. Traveler,'s friend is a pilot loves to fly moves "back east".
- 9/1/17 start development of Gizmo a la W. L.
- Impact of climate change, the west, carbon
- Traveler, and the ranch, the fence, TOO SMALL TO FAIL
- The limitless supply meets the insatiable need, sinking carbon
- Carbanado X/C
- Year -40 Wiscasset
- Carbanado dealership
- Flying machines
- The Great Debt Collapse, (When Nations Default)
- The University
- Tom and Hardy in the Energized Particle Department
- Escape to Freedom
- The First Nuclear Site, Brotentide
- We Can Make Anything, but Not Everything
- First Ship In Class 30M Catamaran
- Broch Viavik, outpost learning to build a city
- The First City Site Around The City
- Catastrophe - Wild Fire - Climate Change
- Spreading Out, Towers, Clear Zones, Carbon Fiber
- A Pointless Naval Skirmish - Now What
- How Do You Weaponize A University? A City? Its Surroundings
- A Militia Attack Starts A Wildfire
- An Age Old Problem, Building Weapons On A Budget
- Change And Polarization
- The Least Force
MusicSummertime with a kazoo and ukelele after the fresh faces new awakening kids get destroyed, showing what is left
Christian version of Haleluja Stephanie Authur's song
Ain't no love in the heart of the city Bobby Blues Band, can I do this wth kazoo, can it kind of bleed over to Sumnertime, (sort of)? An apartment in Nuovo di Bagnoregio
Road House Blues, Jeff Healy from the Movie
Radar Love YA Roadtrip
Glory glory hallelujah negro spiritual
Black Lives Matter Pastor Chris Harris
Middle Age Blues Saffire when YYY the cougar member of the gang of 7 seduces some young buck
Paradise (Daddy won't you take me back to muchelenberg country) John Prine
Good bad and Ugly showdown in Wiscasset at Carbanado Dealership
All along the watchtower Battlestar galactica soundtrack Vivek attack?
Lara Croft - Tomb Raider Soundtrack (Leftfield - Song Of Life )
Larry Howard - Everybody wants to go to heaven - great for fake news
God of this City - Chris Tomlin (maybe a Hezekiah like scene surrounded by a greater force)
Walk like a man
Nothing else matters - This could work with Traveler, and Jane
Winter Song Celine Dion
Sisters are doing it for themselves A AI's theme song
Boulay Boulay Boom Expendables
Be nice for a wanton violence scene
Gotta get out of this place - The animals, Traveler, is escaping in Black Sun, both body guards are dead.