Table of Contents HNMNBM

11/22/17
HNMNBM is science fiction. The purpose is to entertain, challenge, and inform. The book presents a liberal Christian viewpoint of the day after tomorrow. Nine strangers, some coming of age, from a variety of races, creeds and color meet, grow, develop together in a time of heightened violence, political polarization, pollution, waste, climate change, and economic change, (fiat currency, gilded age). Against that backdrop, the group must work together to survive, worship and prosper.

NOTE: If the book is successful, the plot design allows for expansion into a trilogy, (HNMNBM, Blue Circle, and Citia).

Themes:

Intelligence, life will find a way, ai, AI, goals, human, canine, rat?
Ecology, carbon, plastic
Natural disasters
Violence, political polarization
Debt
Crow, the 5th animal
Up and Out, owe my soul to the company store
Disposable people, haves, midway haves, have nots
Cybersecurity, privacy, what will you pay for security esp physical security
Cryptocurrency, blue circle
Business card, all have special properties


Characters, brief, see character file:

Wonk: taking care of business, growing up, first sex, 21 and fake persona, manhood, likes to bonk, business card
Guy:
Gloria, hotter than Yolanda, MA, becomes messianic jew
Yolanda, Otter/beaver, cougar, financial success, Yolanda's children
Traveler, carbon, ascetism, founder HNMNBM, tree hugger, Christian
Gizmo, things are going bad, physical security, physical disasters,
Clara Bow, shadowy mystical person, Relationship Concierge, hooks Guy up with net girls, later, Wonk with Fozia

Writing style:
Time in the 24 hour system 4:00 PM is 1600 in the book
Metric system unless there is an explicit reason to use English/American
Molecules do not use subscript, (hard to read) CO2 H2O etc
Numbers in numeric form unless: very large, or it sounds good Saul has his thousands, David has his tens of thousands
Quoted speech, trying to avoid unnecessary quotes, if I need to bring attention to a phrase, I use quotes, punctuation is inside the "
Word boxes are used to explain obscure references, author of poetry etc as a white space alternative to inline explanations that are also used. Try to make it sound like an AI inserted, (no humor, concise)
Run on sentences, yup
References to songs, poems, literature, realize this needs to be standardized
Indent 1: Phone, email, presence, telegram etc
Indent 2: Explanatory text
Indent 3: Sidebars, need to look at this closely


Intellectual Property:
Many real companies/place names consider asking for permission and ....... I have tried to be more careful with people unless historical and famous e.g. Albert Einstein

Politics:
The novel is politically biased, even so I try to avoid Republican, Democrat, Right, Left, some bleedthrough may happen


HNMNBM (Book 1)
1.1 In which we introduce the primary character Wonk as well as Chase Slocom and Gloria
Two total years before 1.2December, six months before 1.2 This chapter serves as the preface or introduction. Introduce Wonk, Guy, Shari, Wonk's bikini barista, Reverend Slocom, Chara HNMNBieNet, Gloria Bestow |
Draft v.2 12/1/17

1.2 In which we introduce Traveler, make sure Wonk is familiar with HNMNBie, gets laid, (and harvested) and lay the seed that he may be a clone
June Bat Mitzvah, Yolanda, Traveler,  Wonk gets laid 1st time, develop HNMNBM, Ahuva, Rhea and Bandi, doppleganger, four animals + crow, Gloria hires Rhea. | Draft v.2 12/3/17

1.3 In which we demonstrate both men are martial artists, (not superstars though), introduce Wonks future bad guy squad, blue blood, and most important Net Girls
  Mid-July Wonk Adrian Wave park fight, Stephen Paddock, filtered water, (starting to set up neo-puritans, Madagascar Charles Vanderbilt, Traveler's first EA,  the HNMNBM party, Blue Circle, Skip PNWRV,  WTG tacticals(Wonk, Traveler, Gizmo),  PSE, Humph the neorat, Wonk Safety and Security, Guy meets net girls, Wonk first meets Fozia, (nothing serious, introducing the character) | Draft v.2 12/4/17
*** Can we do some Rhea character development in 1.3? We need her by 1.4.
NOTE: all themes have been introduced in each of 1.1, 1.2, 1.3

1.4 In which Wonk gets laid, and loves Gloria who makes Aliya, introduce depository II, doppleganger defeats facial recognition
  August Gloria Aliyah love,  Madagascar II, Cody and Bandi, Traveler visits the PNWRV with Skip in Nevada, ooh la la, Pussy Galore drama leads to Wonk's business Lucida, protective AI, robot PSE,  Doppleganger opens iPhone. | Draft v.2 12/9/17

1.5 In which H Coin is born, Wonk does tantra, Angelica and Yolanda realize the importance of taking HNMNBM underground
  September Key signing at Iron Spring, waiter, business card, deranged AI |
= need to do more character development of Angelica w Yolanda HNMNBM underground

1.6 Traveler is made, escape to Hawaii
  Late October Aliya Traveler,'s Escape to Hawaii Yolanda, surges forward, power of influence , End October Traveler,'s escape, haircut, more development EVE EVE.ai, Sandy, Hawaii, NOTE: words like Aloha, Mahalo are not used before 1.6 Gloria, Aliyah, ninja girl video, Madagascar III smart rats |

1.7  In which we introduce No Problem AirService AND B2B giving our characters the ability to travel without going through major airports all of the time
November Wonk/Traveler, Frequent flyers, No Problem AirService, Blockchain sneakernet, AI concierge, Madagascar III, Up and Out, Ahuva counsels Traveler, |

1.8 In which we build on the concept of the "gang" started in 1.5
  November Tea house, shared IT Department, mail, phones, assassinbot, He is < I, Guy's house, first carbon house, Guy goes to Hawaii. Draft  v11/21/17

1.9 In which we introduce Robust as villains, Net Girls as smart, fun loving AND dangerous, differentiate Blue Circle and HNMNBie, introduce High Table, Josh, H Coin value, Blimps, FireLine robots, Shipping all needed later in the book
December rainy season in Madagascar begins

  NOTE: We move the clock forward 2 years in this chapter. HNMNBie data center, statue, Robust terrorist show of strength, bombs, terrorist captured, Blue Circle High Table Josh Bandon, meeting Green Bay, H coin, blimp, FireLine, Shipping

1.10 In which Traveler falls in love, Green Bay shows Josh is at odds, more hints of NeoPuritanism, 14 year old girl and the noblesse oblige argument with XXX from High Table, Wonk takes on a leadership role in the "gang"

Leilani and Traveler, Green Bay, Wonk considered for invitation by Blue Circle high table; promising, but not time. Traveler returns to Hawaii. Wonk is getting much more active in the protection safety business, this is the point where he and Operator move into the COO/consigliere role. Fire tacticals

1.11 In which Blue Circle Splinters into a no HNMNBM segment, releases B Coin
 Josh Bandon breaks with the Blue Circle/HNMNBM leaning people and creates his own following NeoPuritan targeting greater government management, "they'll believe what I tell them to believe" But Josh doesn't have a seat at the ever more attractive H Coin table, tries to create B Coin

1.12 In which the Circle is broken, strife, some HNMNBie persecution, but they haven't cracked the code, end of chapter Leilani dies

1.13  In which Traveler returns to the mainland to stay, Lake Tapps escape, Wonk is invited to Blue Circle B

1.14 In which Wonk gets engaged to Fozia, he consolidates his power

1.15 In which the tax revolt movement begins
The high school majority reduces funding for higher education

1.16

1.17

1.18 Guy talks the gang into entering an ice canoe race. "Originally a means of winter transport between the islands and shores of the Saint Lawrence River, ice canoeing is now a sport. Crews of five athletes alternately push their canoe across the ice on the frozen parts of the river, and row in a river with currents of four knots, tides of over 15 feet, and ice blocks weighing a few tonnes blown by the wind.[1] Shoes with bolts screwed to the bottom are worn to keep their traction on the ice."
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ice_canoeing

1.19 Stillness. Debt crisis begins. Vesper

1.20 In which Gloria dies, Traveler becomes the leader of the gang of 9, Darkness Fall. Last chapter.





8/31/17

  1. Year -50 Traveler, and the fence - In this chapter, we need to introduce the gang of 7, (before it exists), need something on the West coast as well. Need to introduce the University. Need drama and character development. Traveler,'s friend is a pilot loves to fly moves "back east".
  2. 9/1/17 start development of Gizmo a la W. L.
    1. Impact of climate change, the west, carbon
    2. Traveler, and the ranch, the fence, TOO SMALL TO FAIL
    3. The limitless supply meets the insatiable need, sinking carbon
    4. Carbanado X/C
  3. Year -40 Wiscasset
    1. Carbanado dealership
    2. Flying machines

  1. The Great Debt Collapse, (When Nations Default)
  2. The University
  3. Tom and Hardy in the Energized Particle Department
  4. Escape to Freedom
  5. The First Nuclear Site, Brotentide
  6. We Can Make Anything, but Not Everything
  7. First Ship In Class 30M Catamaran
  8. Broch Viavik, outpost learning to build a city
  9. The First City Site Around The City
  10. Catastrophe - Wild Fire - Climate Change
  11. Spreading Out, Towers, Clear Zones, Carbon Fiber
  12. A Pointless Naval Skirmish - Now What
  13. How Do You Weaponize A University? A City? Its Surroundings
  14. A Militia Attack Starts A Wildfire
  15. An Age Old Problem, Building Weapons On A Budget
  16. Change And Polarization
  17. The Least Force

Music

Summertime with a kazoo and ukelele after the fresh faces new awakening kids get destroyed, showing what is left
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L5xafQXg1yI

Christian version of Haleluja Stephanie Authur's song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mQh8Edu0TII
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hZi3ut9ee0Y

Ain't no love in the heart of the city Bobby Blues Band, can I do this wth kazoo, can it kind of bleed over to Sumnertime, (sort of)? An apartment in Nuovo di Bagnoregio

Road House Blues, Jeff Healy from the Movie
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hyflyJjJrf4

Radar Love YA Roadtrip

Glory glory hallelujah negro spiritual
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V7CuZDm6i4I

Black Lives Matter Pastor Chris Harris
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GhKVtP3hqOA

Middle Age Blues Saffire when YYY the cougar member of the gang of 7 seduces some young buck
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Nb_KJyMHgw

Paradise (Daddy won't you take me back to muchelenberg country) John Prine
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DEy6EuZp9IY

Good bad and Ugly showdown in Wiscasset at Carbanado Dealership
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AFa1-kciCb4

All along the watchtower Battlestar galactica soundtrack Vivek attack?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BigolJfoANw

Lara Croft - Tomb Raider Soundtrack (Leftfield - Song Of Life )
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X33nIletkok

Larry Howard - Everybody wants to go to heaven - great for fake news
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X33nIletkok

God of this City - Chris Tomlin (maybe a Hezekiah like scene surrounded by a greater force)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X33nIletkok

Walk like a man
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X33nIletkok

Nothing else matters - This could work with Traveler, and Jane
https://genius.com/Metallica-nothing-else-matters-lyrics

Winter Song Celine Dion
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xL0HndB3O7U

Sisters are doing it for themselves A AI's theme song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=drGx7JkFSp4


Boulay Boulay Boom Expendables
Be nice for a wanton violence scene

Gotta get out of this place - The animals, Traveler, is escaping in Black Sun, both body guards are dead.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jxNEiZhpinY

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